We began fishing at Taman Buah Mekarsari. I couldn't get into the pond, because I was standing on ground that was very slippery like ice. Finally, I could go into the pond because I slipped.
The pond was very yucky, gross and disgusting. It looked like porridge combined with black tomato sauce. I was lucky because the pond wasn't so awful after all.
The first time I wanted to grab a fish, the fish was wiggling and flipping like a mad frog. Oh man! I missed it because the fish moved too fast like a tornado.Yes! The second time worked. Then I had a strategy to catch the fish by the head.It was a success although they moved like gusts but I caught five fishes.
When I caught the fish it was scaly and slimy to hold just like black gooey glue.
The mud smelled terrible like someone who hasn't cleaned his breathe for a thousand years.
I felt contented because I caught five fishes.
6 comments:
aditya you have 9/10 because you have a spelling is wrong.
Aditya, Well done! Great writing for your first try at this creative writing style. Do some quick edits. You have a few typing errors. I won't mark you just yet ok.
Aditya your score is...9/10 because I think that you need to check your spelling.
I guess 10/10 but wrong spelling so 9/10 OK!!!!!!!!!!!!
your score 10/10......
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